I’ve been told that I don’t write like a girl. More specifically, that I spend less time than other female authors describing what the characters in my stories are wearing. There’s a reason for that – I’m bad at it!
In my world, I notice a lot about expressions, gestures, sounds and smells, but very little about what people are wearing. I barely pay attention to what I’m wearing, making it a challenge when I need to attend an event where I need to “dress up.” As a result, clothing is only important to include in my writing when it it adds necessary context – which for me, isn’t often. But it does happen.
For example, the juxtaposition between a well-to-do professional woman and a young laborer from the Appalachian hills would be obvious at a glance, even at a distance. It would show in their clothes. But that means I have to DESCRIBE what they’re wearing.
This is where internet shopping saves me. It’s another form of research that goes into a novel. I can picture the general nature of the clothes each of the characters would wear, but I don’t know what they are called – particularly in the case of the woman. Off to the internet! For her, I chose to shop at Sax Fifth Avenue, comparing skirt and jacket styles until I was sure I could use terms most people would understand. For him? Kohl’s.com. In short order, I had my scene where these two characters meet and the differences between them are immediately obvious to the reader.
Without the pictures and descriptions on the internet clothing sites, these scenes would take me forever! I’m not even sure how I’d do them – go quiz store clerks? “What do you call this style? And this one? What makes it one particular style and not another?” Bet they’d love that!
In any event, that’s my big gratitude for today – internet shopping. Or there’s my even bigger gratitude – that I am feeling well enough to do some serious writing! Hooray!